Friday, March 30, 2007
Before Sunset
Sunrise brings her light on my eyes so softly,filling my heart with expectations.
She is so nice with her temperate glory.I am
immersed in the delight she gives me!She bears
nothing lukewarm to me till she reaches the zenith.She takes the initiative so zealously that
I barely withstand her.I start to blame her passion.That is too hot to bear!She seems to perceive my repulsion about her,treating me in a
milder manner.It is the time that I suddenly become aware of her beauty!She gives off her glamour by dying the sky.So gorgeous,so attractive that I want to seize her.However,she
becomes so changeable,so capricious!I am fascinated as well as perplexed.Gradually,her passion subside;she even stars to wane!I want to
detain her but in vain.How mortifying!Vainly,my affection is left in darkness lonely!
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2 comments:
What an artistic discribtion! I like the feeling. You think the sunset is a beautiful and passionate girl. That is interesting. The ending is a little bit sad. But, I really like it.
I use so many "she."
Is this a poor article,teacher?
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